Talk:Landmark Worldwide

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Sub-headers in Article[edit]

I noticed someone added a sub-header in the article on the French video. That is inconsistent with the rest of the article and provides that with a lot of emphasis- that topic has been hashed through and de-emphasized in this article many times before. I would suggest removing the sub-header if no one objects. Alex Jackl (talk) 16:49, 20 November 2019 (UTC)

I added that sub-header, because with ~40% of the criticism section devoted to that one video, I feel it is appropriate to give its own section. With ~ 10% of the sources in this article for just that video section, I see no reason it should be "de-emphasized". I added a title I feel is neutrally descriptive. ---Avatar317(talk) 22:25, 21 November 2019 (UTC)
I see no reason to give the French TV programme any different treatment from any other items in this section, so I have removed the sub-head. DaveApter (talk) 16:56, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
It looks like someone came in and just added in MORE sub--headers to the criticism section. I also do not see this as balanced or consistent with the rest of the article. I will remove. Alex Jackl (talk) 17:59, 25 February 2020 (UTC)

Accuracy and neutrality of subheadings[edit]

I changed the sub-head "Scientists' views" to "Academics' opinions", and it was promptly reverted. I would contend that the original version is not only misleading but inaccurate. The writers in almost all of the references are sociologists, and so would more accurately be described as academics than as scientists. The only one who is a scientist - Charles Watson - is mentioned as a result of a one line quotation in a lifestyle article in an Australian tabloid. Incidentally, his remark was made in support of Landmark, which is not at all clear to a reader of this paragraph. And why is views preferable to opinions? It seems to have been chosen to provide a spurious air of objectivity and authority, as contrasted with the mere "opinions" of reporters, in the sub-head of the paragraph below. DaveApter (talk) 17:40, 27 February 2020 (UTC)

I re-ordered this whole section with an earlier edit to group (scientists) then (reporters) then (French show). I haven't read the sources to challenge your critique of Scientists/Academics, but I named it Scientists because the first sentence says: "Scientists are divided..." (Apparently you don't think of sociologists as Scientists and you want to demote their status to Academics.)
If "views" adds more weight to their opinions, than I believe it is due here, because academics are the type of people who are more knowledgeable in this area...they study religions/cults/psychology. Reporters are no different than everyday uneducated (in those specific fields) people who took the Forum and reported their opinions on it. Wikipedia SHOULD give their opinions less weight, and should be reported more as opinion, unless their article surveyed academics and reported on what academics stated.
Lastly, I take issue with your other edit (which was also reverted in the same action) because the "Media comment" would include all reporters (the sub-section above), and demotes the French show in the same manner as you're complaining about with Views/Opinions. The French show got so much press (five references here) that I believe it is big enough for its own sub-section. I wasn't the one who renamed it to "documentary"... I had named it "French journalism video". ---Avatar317(talk) 21:01, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for your response. I don't concur that referring to someone as an 'academic' is a "demotion" from referring to them as a 'scientist'; in this case it's simply a more accurate description of the individuals concerned. We could debate endlessly about whether the social sciences count as "real" science, but they obviously don't have the same rigour or objectivity as say physiology or chemistry. So to generalise them as "scientists" here is to give a misleading impression. Furthermore, if you actually read the references you will find that in most cases Landmark gets no more than a passing mention (ranging between a couple of sentences and a couple of pages). Most of the writers don't claim to have studied or even observed any of Landmark's courses, and are repeating hearsay or offering armchair speculation. Once again to imply that this is an authoritative "view" is misleading.
The source for the opening sentence is - as I said - a lifestyle article in one of Rupert Murdoch's tabloids. It's debatable whether that counts as a reliable source at all. The justification for the sentence consists of two single-line quotes: on the one hand "clinical psychologist Bob Montgomery told 7.30 he was concerned there was no credible science backing the controversial techniques" (incidentally there's no suggestion of Montgomery making any study of the Landmark Forum to arrive at that view), and on the other hand neuroscientist Dr Charles Watson said "Speaking from my expertise and experience as a medical doctor and former chief health officer, my view is that there is absolutely nothing harmful in Landmark's programs". That's surely pretty slender grounds for the assertion that "scientists are divided"? The reference to Watson again in the third sentence is also misleading, since there is no evidence that he expressed any opinion on the issue of whether or not Landmark could reasonably be described as a "new religious movement".
I'm not greatly bothered about the wording of the third sub-head. But I do think it's maybe giving undue weight to devote so much space to a biased and sensationalist TV program from 16 years ago. DaveApter (talk) 11:29, 28 February 2020 (UTC)
Since no-one has contested my observations above, I am removing the non-WP:RS ref and the inaccurate and unsupported statements. DaveApter (talk) 11:46, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Tactics and Methods[edit]

Does anyone mind if I create a section on methods or technology used within the forum? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dabrams13 (talkcontribs) 16:43, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

That would be fine as long as the info is sourced from Independent Sources WP:IS, NOT Landmark's website or course materials. ---Avatar317(talk) 19:44, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Removed Vandalism[edit]

Reverted to last edit today (May 13) from vandalism in lead paragraph. Alex Jackl (talk) 03:21, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

NPOV comment removed[edit]

An anonymous editor added an inappropriate assertion to the lead, cited to a Mother Jones article. Apart from the fact that the statement is clearly one of opinion, not fact, and that the writer of the article has no notable expertise in the subject, it is clearly not justified to editorialise that ""To date...continues to..." based on a reference which is eleven years old. It would be appropriate to discuss changes on this talk page before making controversial edits to an article such as this, which has reached a stable consensus after a contentious history. DaveApter (talk) 15:16, 2 October 2020 (UTC)